You really do need to add some illustrations to your blog entries - use a camera phone to capture your group's activity, for example. Also, try to reflect a little more carefully and constructively - at the moment it reads like you've rished it all down a little too quickly. For example - what more filming do you need to do, and (in detail) why? remember that this is the evidence of how you can reflect thoughtfully on your work in progress.
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